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FFN SCAREDuckies,
Alright, I'm here to officially address the hullabaloo that's going on with fanfiction.net right now.  I understand why everyone is concerned, I really do, but as I've had to state several times, it's not the end of the world.  FFN has always had the rule in their TOS, if anyone cared to read them in full during each submission process, that sexually explicit *among other things* stories were not allowed.  So, we all knew, or should have known, that something like this could one day happen.  I know you guys are upset that stories are getting deleted, I know you guys are upset that the community that was started there could possibly crumble, but if the community is that strong, do something about it.  And no, I do not mean start a petition that will never amount to anything.
Leave FFN.  I've been saying it for years now, ever since the Red Button fiasco a while back: if you're so damn scared, go somewhere else. 
Back to Business?I have previews of a few new chapters I'm working on. None for The Cleaners yet, though, sorry. :iconsweatplz:
I need honest feedback because a couple of these I'm not really too keen on. You'll let me know, won't you? :iconawwwplz:
So, first up is Deja Vu.
XOXOXO
Grimmjow blew out an exasperated breath as he caught the orange-haired center fielder around the waist. Drunk idiot, he inwardly fumed. He couldn't believe Kurosaki had gotten so inebriated from two of those drinks. Granted they were big and came with an extra shot of rum, but still... He glanced down at the swaying man and shook his head, brows knitted. This was just ridiculous. It was eleven o'clock at night and here he was only slightly buzzed as he led Kurosaki back to his car. The man stumbled every other step and leaned heavily against his side.
"Mmm-hmm-hmm," the center fielder hummed.
His face was flushed and those deep brown eyes were hooded and glassy. All in all, the guy was fucked up. Grimmjow wanted to laugh, but
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K this is the 'nearly done' version of this concentration. There is another one, the one 2-3 steps behind this, in the gallery next to it (if you mind looking, that is)

Here is the step before it:[link]
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Critique by *orange-leaves Mar 3, 2012, 3:04:16 PM
It's clear that your dragon is underwater - the way the light, resolution and color recede make it immediately obvious. The light source is consistent; a bit from the artificial light by the diver, a bit from above and they have different color-temperatures, too. The sinuous shape recedes into the background, echoed by the rows of scales and the crest ridge. One thing that might make it "pop" more is highlighting the reflection off the dragon's eyes, perhaps. One suggestion have is that the diver uses an air hose, an antiquated piece of equipment, but the helmet does not match it; it seems too small. From what I have seen in the museum, the old "aqualung" helmets were pretty big, spanning almost from shoulder to shoulder. I know you can't show the bars over the windows because of the angle, but that's okay. If you make the diving equipment more consistent, it will place your dragon into a particular period in history right away (think Captain Nemo...)

IMHO, this image would make a wonderful wallpaper poster. I would buy it.
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~khitsu Feb 27, 2012
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Hope you don't mind :)
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~MirandaPavelle Feb 29, 2012  Professional General Artist
not at all :)
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